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Jellyfish

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Jellyfish

Your colors dancing
with dazzling illumination
moved by haunting beauty
I fall away upon your
wavering folds of breathtaking
hypnotic sway

Drawn ever closer
to be entwined
within your deadly flare
you leave me intoxicated
by iridescent elegance

My gaze held fixed
kept unwavering
you have me paralyzed
lured within your shimmering
world of fatale secrets

But such sweet serenity
was found while floating
upon your currents of
enchanting tendrils.

Now fading slowly
I see only in a blur above
your colors still dancing
merging and parting
before blackness
takes me in.

Updated 02-13-2009 at 01:25 AM by Dark Muse

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  1. mtpspur's Avatar
    Possibly the most beautiful sounding poem I've had the pleasure of reading. Verse 3, Line 3--I think you meant to say "me" instead of "my." Freely confess I am far behind in catching up with your material as well as others. But you are not forgotten.
    Updated 02-14-2009 at 04:58 AM by mtpspur
  2. Dark Muse's Avatar
    Thank you very much. I have always had a fascination with the jellyfish

    oo thanks for catching that
  3. yingzi's Avatar
    brilliant!!! Jellyfish is one of my favorite creatures. Thanks for sharing.