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To my lovely niece

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ChinaRose
, 02-03-2009 at 03:40 AM (3150 Views)
Lovely girl,
with the apple-cheeked ,
with the big eyes glittering,
on the face,
Since you were born,

Lovely girl,
With the naive appearence,
With the kind heart,
With the cluck,
Like the angel bring cheer to her around world,

Lovely girl,
For my wish,
To keep out all the danger for you,
To hope you grow like the wild flower,
Strong and Brilliant.

C.R
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  1. Silas Thorne's Avatar
    I love the last two lines. Grow like the wild flower, strong and brilliant. Wonderful! Strong as it's a wild flower and can grow in tough places, brilliant in intelligence or personality (for a person) and colour (for a flower)
    A couple of suggestions. Maybe the second line could be 'with the apple cheeks', or 'apple-cheeked'. And also, I think you mean 'the world around her' in the last line of the second part.

    Have you heard the Chinese singer Tian Yuan from the band 'Hopscotch' 跳房子? All her songs are in English, and she can write books in English too. Everything is possible, keep writing.
  2. Virgil's Avatar
    Ah, sounds like something from the heart. I too liked the apple cheeks and grow like the wild liines.
  3. kiz_paws's Avatar
    Very pretty.