Once in a small wood she kissed me pitying a piteous boy a broken arm with a writeable cast. She signed the cast kissed me I walked home on the tops of trees and she left for the earth I never came down.
This was quite interesting
Silas, I loved this little poem. My favorite line was "I walked home on the tops of trees". Sweet!
'i never came down'. the kissed must made the boy excessively happy and he reached the sky, lost in the paradise of that kiss. this is the impression i got from your poem. i don't know if this was the feeling you wanted the reader to get, but still, i liked it in the way i understood it.
yes, exactly maraki. And thanks kizz paws, for not showing your claws.
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