Silas Thorne's Journal

Hmmm. I'm not "getting" the punchline, really. And the simile, I can't see a cap on sunlight. Maybe a smiley face, but not sunlight. And is it really talking about eyes or is this really have to do with boobs? I really like the World Nude Day part.

Yep, not too proud of this one, it was just for fun, which is why I didn't post it in Personal Poetry. Changed it a little though. I was happier with 'there is a connection' more.

The cadence is excellent. Remember that content is only one component that makes poems dance.

Thanks, good to know that there's something here, even if the point was lost.

I... don't get it... I tried, but I don't. :S

Well, Becca, it's like this:

No flash permitted

would you give me one

("for World Nude Day")

and Dot Dot Dot.

I thought that the poem was cute, Silas. I liked the line

sunlight with the lense cap on

.

it could be a flash of her eyes too

I like this one Silas