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The Harelequins Last Dance

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I wrote this for a competition on another forum. You were given a list of words that had to be included in the poem, and the poem could be no longer then 30 lines.

I really liked how it came out.

The Harlequins Last Dance

There is a most macabre tale to be told
of a harlequin of such great pulchritude
her face was painted in shades of lavender
and her smile was sublime, upon her comely
legs she wore white-checkered stockings

Oh when she danced it was a delirium
of colors, shapes, motions, blurred to
sublimate all who would watch her.

She tried ever so hard to imitate
a human soul, but inside her heart was cold
and so a lover was greatly spurned by her
silent unmoving looks.

He was a British gentlemen and when
he first laid eyes upon her, it gave him such
a frisson, he baked her a cake three feet high
but when his favor was not returned, he flew
into a rave spouting neologisms, and determined
to end her, he dug out a hole to be her grave
and thus she was laid never to dance again.


Here is the word list:

hole
comely
lavender
bake
pulchritude
frisson
macabre
harlequin
delirium
imitation
neologism
grave
heart
soul
rave
stockings
British
silent
sublime
sublimate
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Comments

  1. maraki16's Avatar
    i really liked the third stanza muse. i think it must be hard to write a poem including so many words that have been given to you. sounds challenging, you should have a lot of talent and imagination as to not feel imposed.
  2. Virgil's Avatar
    This is good Muse, one of your best, except for the last stanza. The last stanza doesn't seem stylistically to go with the rest. It seems to become prose. Somehow the rhythm of that last stanza changed. Some of those words are rhythmically unfriendly: gentleman, neologisms, determined.
  3. Dark Muse's Avatar
    Thank you, yes it was hard stylystically working with some of those unusual and unpoetic words, while still having it make some since.