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There is sweet perfection in her kiss,
and in her smile is every grace and art.
Every turn of philosophy leads to this,
mutual in our love, we share one heart.
There is not one word I would rather know
than the one sweet sound of my lover's name.
While this heart beats sometimes fast or slow,
it only beats for this eternal flame.
In my poor heart my lover reigns supreme,
whose tenderness has grafted onto me
A single will, fixed on a single theme,
A love, a flame, a heart, for eternity.

Updated 01-18-2009 at 03:41 AM by NikolaiI

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  1. Dark Muse's Avatar
    This is beautiful and full of passion and love.
  2. Anza's Avatar
    That is absolutely beautiful, Nik. You're a fantastic poet.
  3. Virgil's Avatar
    Very well done Nik. The rhythm and rhyme is wonderfuly executed but more importantly it feels so flawless and smooth. Top notch kudos.
  4. NikolaiI's Avatar
    wow, thank you all!! I am glad you liked it. :D
  5. 1n50mn14's Avatar
    One to rival Byron ; )

    This is simply lovely.
  6. andave_ya's Avatar
    wow, lovely! My favorite lines were the last two
  7. Virgil's Avatar
    My favorite lines were the last two
    You're right. I didn't realize how spectacular they are.
  8. NikolaiI's Avatar
    Thank you Becca, Andave and Virgil!