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Poppa popped me one.

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Poppa popped me one.
Forearms like Popeye
he twisted one eye to a bead,
swinging hamfisted havoc.
Kapow!
the card castle that I am
oyles away like olive to the ground
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  1. Virgil's Avatar
    I love that first line, and the rest is fine too. I said on the boards it felt incomplete. I guess it could stand as is. It's so cute I wish it could go some more.