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His Obsession

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Cat_Brenners
, 01-12-2009 at 03:07 AM (1827 Views)
His Obsession"

mesmerized by
chestnut hair
blushed cheeks

robust blood
pumps through
my veins
and I tremble

sun reddened
eyes stare at me
as I
scorch
with raw
redolence

I vanish to the ocean
arms extended
in shameless summons
to my
obsession

the mermaid
disappears

Updated 01-12-2009 at 03:24 AM by Cat_Brenners

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  1. Neo_Sephiroth's Avatar
    Ooooooo...Nice.
  2. mtpspur's Avatar
    When I read the mermaid line visions of an O Henry ending came to mind. Evocative alos comes to mind but I know little of poetry and look to Dark Muse as my favorite in that area.
  3. Cat_Brenners's Avatar
    Thanks for reading and commenting. You like dark muse huh? Will think about that and come up with something later.
    Hugs, Cat