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Shurtie, am I allowed to edit it for you? There are a few grammatical errors (very minor), and I'd be more than willing to do that for you ^^ I also get more from stories I edit than stories I read.
Very beautiful!

sure, go ahead... bleck, i think i'm going to go over my work before posting. i'm making to many mistakes grammatically and spelling.

The sun was setting, making the sky a wonderful orange color, with streaks of pink and purple. She flopped herself on the ground and— pulling her knees up to her chest— rested her head upon them. The breeze played with her long, brown hair as she stared out at the sea, which lay before her. I don't love you, she heard his voice say. She shuddered, and wrapped her white-laced, pink dress closer around her legs. Crying of gulls filled the air, but she did not hear them; all she heard was his voice-- I don't love you.
Why didn't he love her? She had done everything in her capability to show her dedication, and commitment, but still he had denied her. A tear now rested on her cheek. Everything she had done became empty and pointless when he had said those four, simple words.
But I love you, she thought with the bitter pain she had experienced to be told once again that she was unloved. She had always been unloved but it seemed to her as if he could love her— she knew he could if he tried. She knew he could, if she showed him that she cared and wanted to be loved. But he didn't try, and he didn't love her.
Slowly, she stood; the wind grabbed her skirt and whipped it in front of her. Had she heard right? There it was again. I love you, a mysterious voice said. She looked around her wildly, but she could see no one. Look at the sunset, spoke the voice. As soon as she did she saw a face so kind and friendly that her tears stopped flowing. I love you, the voice said again. I've always loved you. I called for you, but your adoration for him closed your eyes to my love, my eternal love. A love that will never die no matter what you do. She had frozen at the edge of the cliff.
"Take me away." She heard her voice say. The face in the sky smiled. Come, child. You have suffered far too long. She looked at the raging sea below her, and she was not afraid. She was going to a place of peace, eternal peace. Before her mind could stop her, she leapt from the cliff. The wind rushed around her briefly, and then there was nothing.
She opened her eyes and her world was a brilliant white. The face now had a body, and He was walking toward her, a silver mist moving around Him with each step He took. She began running toward Him. He loved her!
But just before she was quiet in His arms, she stopped short, fear gripping her. What if He didn't love her? What if she had to do something again? Fear not child, there is nothing for you to fear. You never had to do anything to earn it; you have always had it. I could not give my love to you until you could give the most important thing of yours to me— your trust. You had trusted everyone else, and all that was left of your trust was torn and battered. But I loved you, and that small piece of trust that you had was what granted you the love that I have always held for you.

thanks anza! appreciate it alot! *hugs*

You're really amazing at making me feel appreciated, Shurtie... <3