A Little Bit of Everything

Very pretty Adoereo. To many refrains for me though. I wonder if I cut some judiciously if it would improve the poem. How's this?

Maybe I will breath tomorrow
the sweet scent of your presence
hold you in my arms,
tell you how I feel
maybe I will cry from joy

Maybe I will be alone
with silence my only companion
feel nothing,
be silent
maybe I will cry from sorrow

Maybe I will stop wishing
and whispering "maybe..."
Maybe I will stand
and be heard
and you will love me
and maybe
just maybe
I will become we
and maybe
we will be together

Better?

I agree- it is better. Thank you [: