Halls of the Dark Muse

Ooh, I really liked the first two stanzas and perhaps the third was good too. "I must be honest/with myself" That sounds so sincere. I was completely drawn in. I didn't care for the ending though I must admit. The poem was striving for something profound, and the ending just seemed to state the obvious. Just my opinion D-M.

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the first three stanzas are really great! i like them, especially the 'setting' of the poem....night, stars, thoughts...i really like it. the last stanza was not as good as the others, but the poem as a whole is reeeally nice