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Poetic Licence Used and Abused

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Ok I am really annoyed, though about something rather minor, it is just the kind of thing that bugs me, and so I felt like ranting about it.

I have this anthology of Contemporary Poetry, half of it I find interesting, half of it I find unbearable, and a small portion I actually like.

Anyway, I was reading this, (or I should say trying to read it, I became so irritated with it, that I could not finish the whole thing) called Sheffield Ghazal 4: Driving West, by Galway Kinnell

and the poem was not a freaking Ghazal, it did not even remotely bare a resemblance to a Ghazal. It was not written in the structure of a Ghazal, and it did not contain the elements that make a Ghazal, a Ghazal.

It the word Ghazal was not in the title of the poem, while I was reading it, at no point would I have thought. Oh, hey this reminds me of a Ghazal.

If a poet gets inspired by a certain style of poetry and wants to modify it for their own needs, that is one thing, but don't try to claim you are writing something that you are not.

If I read a sonnet, and decided I was inspired by that to write my own version of a sonnet that did not follow any of the actual traditional rules of a sonnet, than I did not write a sonnet. I am not going to claim that it is a sonnet. I will say, I was inspired to write this poem by reading a sonnet.

But just because you are a contemporary poet does not mean you get to write anything the hell you want and claim it is this or that style, if it really isn't.

That is taking Poetic Licence, or Artistic Liberty a stretch too far.
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  1. mtpspur's Avatar
    Well for some reason I began thinking about gazelles running across the African plains so that just proves my zero knowledge of poetry and why Joyce Kilmer and a tree and Flanders Field remain my two favorites. Sigh. But I am with you on authors rigging a perfectly good system to meet their own egocentric view of things rather thn see what they do within the boundary lines--unless they SAY they are experimenting then I don't mind.
  2. Sweets America's Avatar
    But... I love Galway Kinnell! No seriously, you might want to read some other poems by him, just so that you might not stay with a negative impression. Or maybe you will, but at least you will have tried. By the way, I don't love all of his poems either because some of them, I just don't understand. I tried but it was impossible. I was lucky to have an understandable one on my oral exam!
    Updated 09-24-2008 at 11:58 PM by Sweets America
  3. Dark Muse's Avatar
    That was the last poem in the collection I have of his, and I can say I really did not care for any of them
  4. Sweets America's Avatar
    Well then that's ok, it just means that they're not for you or you're not for them. Nothing wrong with that, there are so many other authors you can love.
  5. Dark Muse's Avatar
    Yes that is quite true