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Deleted Poems

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about nine months ago i removed a couple of poems from my Blog and Poems thread in the Personal poetry.
I have decided to put them back as i was intending to enter them into a poetry compatition, but i got cold feet due to a lack of confidence. So here they are. Some of you might remember them.

Enough now, Enough Said

Enough now, Enough said.
Keep your fickle feelings aside.
Everything you say pounds my head.
I'm bruised. Just go, let me hide!
You are not here anymore for me.
Why dont you just go away!
There's nothing here for you to see,
It cant be saved for another day.

I imagine you go and leave me in silence
And lie down where the ground is cold.
And i weep, but not for your absence,
But for the love we let wither, let go old.
Its time to say goodbye, time to leave,
There is more to life and love than we believe.

Niamh King 03/07/2007

Weary
Looking out the window,
What do i see?
I see the world,
It waits for me...
and still waits.

The clock it tolls,
it gives its cry,
but lying i remain,
time passes by...
time and time again.

The light it fades,
but still i lie,
the moon soon rises
in the dark sky...
darker and darker still.

26/3/07

Updated 08-22-2008 at 11:51 AM by Niamh

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  1. NikolaiI's Avatar
    I really like these, and the first one reminds me of poems by famous poets..
  2. Niamh's Avatar
    the first line "Enough Now Enough Said" comes from Oedipus by Sophicles. and thanks for your comment!
  3. tulysg1982's Avatar
    I also like your two poems. Why did u delete it? although a like the second one most. Sometimes i feel in this way.
  4. sprinks's Avatar
    Nice, I like them!!