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Dawn A New Day

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Dawn A New Day

Spread my wings
and fly away

Shed a tear
and hide away

Close my eyes
and dream a new day

On my knees
begging you to stay

If I could breathe
I'd run away

Never a word
I can say

Spread your wings
and carry me away

Together we will enter
a brand new day

You always know
the words to say

From this world
you'll hide me away


I know in your arms
forever I'll stay.

Updated 08-20-2008 at 07:53 PM by Dark Muse

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  1. 's Avatar
    Don't be offended, but I just couldn't overlook the rhythm of the poem. So I thought it would be great for a rock song, I mean a good one. Only the verses
    From this world
    you'll hide me away
    are stepping beyond the song world. And that goes for the last ones also.
  2. Dark Muse's Avatar
    Thank you, and no offense taken, I love to Rock!