No Limits on Imagination!

Hey guys, I'm working on my story, but it's still something to be worked on. here's just a little something I kinda just sat down, put my pencil to the paper, and just let my pen move.

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The cries of the newborn mixed with the warnings of S.S. 691.
"Hurry,get to the mini's now!" Captain John F. Speare scooped up his wife, Jenny Rayenne Speare and their newborn Rondale, carrying them both to the nearest mini.
"It's on auto-pilot, it should thake you right back down to Earth."
"But John, you're not coming?"
"No. I have to make sure everyone gets off this ship before i do...don't worry,I'll be back." He kissed her, then climbed out of the mini."Take care...and wait for me."
"I will...Johny?"
"Hmm?"
"I love you."
"I love you too. Goodbye...until later."
He watched them both until the mini dropped, out of his sight. He sighed, then went around shouting to everyone else"Hey! Get to the nearest mini and jump on. this ship's gonna blow!"
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A warning light blinked on in the mini, followed by blinking lights all around her. Jenny panicked as she listened to the computer as it repeated,"Warning! Nearing black hole."
What was she supposed to do? There wasa myriad of buttons...which ones were she supposed to press?She wished John were here right now.He would've known what to do right now...
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There was a scratching noise at Eden's door, waking her up where she was on her wing-backed chair in front of the blazing fire. Was it another stray?> begging to come in? there seemed to be a lot lately.
"Go away! There are no strays coming in tonight!"she yelled, but the sratching continued."I'm warning you!" But the scratcing didn't cease, if anything it grew louder.
Eden stood, grabbing her broom, she opened her door."I told you-"Eden stopped dead in her sentence. It wasn't a stray she was looking at.
It was awoman, with only enough strength to hold her baby close to her chest, one arm still extended to the door. "Ohh...I'm so sorrymiss..."Eden gasped as she stooped down to help the woman sit up."Are you alright miss? Here, let me help you into the house."
"no.You...can't...help me."the woman said, barely able to whisper.
"yes, I can help you, just let me get you into the house, then I can call an ambulence." Eden managed to get the woman and her infant inside, where she placed them on the bed in the uest room.
The woman sspoke before Eden could slip out." there is but one way you can help me." she whispered. "Take Rondale." she held out her baby, barely able to hold him, causing Eden to rush to her side, picking up the baby. He was sleep. The woman cotinued,"Raise him...take care of him...love him..."
"Miss, I won't let you die-"Eden started to protest.
"Please..." the woman interrupted, her voice faint, and Eden knew she was slipping away."Take him...raise him as your own son."
"But-"
"This is the only way you can help me."
"If it's the only way, then i will."she could see that the woman was dying right in front of her eyes.
The woman smiled. Her last words were,"Find Johny..." then she turned her head and gave up the ghost.
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