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Everything has a past. But not everything has a present. Few live the future. I live the future. It is fading and darkness is destroying us. We are losing the human touch, the human form. Ruled by robots, even I have a robotic arm. Fear is the only thing we know a long with darkness. We learn to live like it, so we learn to die. We are becoming without a heart, without soul. But I don’t want to die here. If the future ends, there is neither past nor present. We want to save the demensions, all of them. But we can’t do it with just the future, we need the past. So we have tried to make contact with the past, but they haven’t replied. Will they reply? Or has our slow death already removed their existence? I go alone to the present, to 2071 krons, where the first signs of our death began. Maybe someone from the past will join me…

sorry, but what do you think of it? it's an intro to a book i have just started like the maybe a month ago. i lost the original note book but i was so desperate that i had to use another one! any comments? questions?
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peace out- argetlam
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  1. mtpspur's Avatar
    Sounds like something Jim Starlin of Gary Moench would have written for Marvel Comics as an intro and that is meant as a compliment. Not up to Alan Moore standards though but few are.
  2. Shurtugal's Avatar
    thanks... uh, who's Jim Starlin?
  3. sprinks's Avatar
    I like it.... sounds intriguing....
  4. andave_ya's Avatar
    Um...what happened while I was gone? I left a good writer and come back to find her morphed into a great writer?? What happened? Can you tell me how you did that?? I want to know!! Cheers, and yep, that sounds really good!!
  5. Shurtugal's Avatar
    sprinks, thanks. andya, i don't know. i implied what you taught me?
  6. PeterL's Avatar
    I wonder where it's going.
  7. Shurtugal's Avatar
    PeterL, somewhere where it causes me to have a huge headache to try to explain what i see in my mind... blech, the worst part of writing!