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The Future's Cry

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ha, ha... so i can both post my poems on the forums and here!

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The Future's Cry

Our souls are dying;
As they claim to heal.
We are lost in the shadows,
No light shines in our world.
We hunger for the human touch,
We look for the human soul.
But our core had killed us.
There seems to be no angels in this desolate world.
It is a prison, a cell for the dead;
A bottomless hole.
No principles stand.
How long can we hold on?
How long can we survive?
We reach out for warmth,
To be burned by ashes.
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Should make a note, that i'm NOT referring so much as today but more in the time frame of tommorrow. like this is what someone wrote to us from the future.
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  1. Anza's Avatar
    woah that's good. That's crazy good. The way the syllables work in the line...
    But our core had killed us.
    ...is breathtaking and makes it stand out.
  2. andave_ya's Avatar
    bravo! Nicely done.
  3. BulletproofDork's Avatar
    But it doesn't rhyme. JK It was super.
  4. Shurtugal's Avatar
    anza! thanks! i'm glad you think it is that good.
    Andave ya! hey, your got to post! how is your vacation so far?
    BP.... *sighs* not all poems have to rhyme... but i'm glad you liked it.