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Reflections on the puddle of life

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, 04-10-2008 at 03:23 PM (1272 Views)

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Updated 07-05-2009 at 06:26 AM by TheFifthElement

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Virgil - 04-10-2008 08:53 PM
My goodness Fifth, this is excellent! "A satisfied cat" -what a great phrase.
PrinceMyshkin - 04-11-2008 07:34 AM
I love this! I love how we return at the end to the same young girl! And may I be so audacious as to wonder whether it wasn't inspired to any degree by my own series of "Snapshots"? but made unmistakeably your own by your usual provision of rich, vivid details. You surely have the poetic equivalent of a green thumb!
Granny5 - 04-11-2008 09:18 PM
How lovely! It's truly wonderful.