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Reflections on the puddle of life

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Updated 07-05-2009 at 06:26 AM by TheFifthElement

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  1. Sweets America's Avatar
    Very nicely put, Fifth! I like this silence facing silence.
  2. PrinceMyshkin's Avatar
    Not that I ever find your poems long-winded - far from that - but this one seems to me to be a bit truncated.
  3. Granny5's Avatar
    I like this Fifth. Very much.
  4. NikolaiI's Avatar
    Truly wonderful-- I love this!!! The more I dissect it the deeper it becomes. This is truly wonderful and I couldn't help reading it lots of times.