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Updated 07-05-2009 at 06:26 AM by TheFifthElement
Very nicely put, Fifth! I like this silence facing silence.
Not that I ever find your poems long-winded - far from that - but this one seems to me to be a bit truncated.
I like this Fifth. Very much.
Truly wonderful-- I love this!!! The more I dissect it the deeper it becomes. This is truly wonderful and I couldn't help reading it lots of times.