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i can't keep myself from posting and typing. (which i find disturbing ya know? ) ok... here it is.
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Auni sat up in her bed and placed her head on her knees. Kioshi was in the other room doing who knew what. She sat there contemplating everything she had learned from Jiedm.

Jiedm was very quiet. He was surprisingly pale for someone who had black hair, too. He looked like he was in his midtwenties- just as Kioshi. Argh, the mechanical hand! It haunted Auni. When she first saw it, her blood went cold. It was unnatural, it seemed, for one to have a fake hand and arm...

That day he had taught her the basic foot positions; where to punch and how; weak points; and ways to block. He said that day had been short, which astonished Auni greatly for they had practiced for two hours. The schedule for tomorrow was they would review what they had learned today and then add to it and whatever Kioshi might had mentioned...

So what was this stuff about Cointa Jiedm had mentioned? Was that what you called her glowing hand? Cointa? Surprisingly she liked the name. It appealed to her in some manner. But what did it all mean?

The only stupid question is a questioned unasked. The voice whispered. (if that was possible.)
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“But will it hurt?” the little boy asked. His pale, vivid eyes shown up at the man.

“Any pain is worth for the greater good,” the man replied. A woman placed her hand on the man’s shoulder.

“No, honey,” the lady said to the boy, “Just lay still...”

The boy looked up at the woman and smiled brightly.

“Okay,” he jumped up on the chair and let them strap his arms down.

“Just relax...” the woman whispered as she hooked a cord onto his right arm. A machine engine started up and different things lit up. The boy clenched his fist when an unexpected pain raced up his arm. He looked frantically at the lady for her to explain. Another wave of pain shot up his arm. It filled up his body and he screamed. More pain entered. He started to kick and pull, but the straps held him down. Tears ran down his cheeks as he screamed in pain... so much pain. Another wave of pain entered. The poor boy was white and clammy. Would the pain ever leave?! Minutes pasted, which felt like hours to the impoverished child. The forth wave was to much and he passed out.


A knock woke Kioshi who had been asleep on his bed. He sat up quickly and rolled his shoulder to wipe out the dream from his head. He hated flash backs.
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Auni had knocked on the door but no one answered. She knocked again as she slowly open the door. Kioshi sat up on the bed, looking at nothing. Auni felt squeamish in his room while he sat on his bed.

“Um... Jiedm said something about asking you to tell me the restrictions of Cointa. What is Cointa?” as soon as she said Cointa, Kioshi seemed to pay full attention.

“Yes, there are restrictions on Cointa if you are on a side.” he said.

“What do you mean by a side?”

“Whose side are you on, Auni? O.T.B. or ours?”

Auni was thrown... what was he talking about.

“I’m on the good side.”

Kioshi appeared to take amused from that remark.

“Do you think the bad guys would do what they do unless they believed it was good? O.T.B. could justify everything they did. They truly believe what they do is right. But to us, they are cruel evil creatures. Good can only be judged by the Deorum.”

Auni didn’t bother asking what- or who- Deorum was.

“I guess I’m on your side.”

“Guessing only answers half of the question.”

She frowned.

“Then I am on your side.”

Kioshi returned his gaze to the wall.

“Then the only restriction for you is not to cause harm for your own gain or any evil matter.”

That was it? So simple?

“Yet there is one thing you can not do unless you want to share your powers .” Kioshi said. “If you are using Cointa, you can’t kiss anyone.”

Auni blushed hard and her stomach dropped.

“I won’t kiss anyone!” she exclaimed, indignation fueling her anger.

“Auni, what are the chances that you will never kiss anyone?”

She opened her mouth to say something, but Kioshi had a look on his face that said not to speak.

“If you kissed anyone while Cointa was in use- Madoline, your mother- you would instantly start sharing it.”

She blushed harder... she had made a fool of herself by letting him see what she was thinking.

Think before speaking. The voice taunted.

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i have news all, this is the end.


















Of Part I!!!!!!!

Got you for a second. thought that i had terrible endings didn't you. I don't know how long it will take me to start posting part II. 2 day, 2 weeks, 2 months. depending on how much you beg me.
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  1. mtpspur's Avatar
    Yes you got me. I thought I was in the middle of a story and was debating backtracking trhiugh your blog--but there is Capt Pike and Meg to watch over also. Never enough time for stories to just linger oin the brain cells and digest in a meditative manner.
  2. Shurtugal's Avatar
    ah, but you must not come at the end of the middle... you won't understand anything. no, go and take you're time reading the other parts, they are in order and i give you premission to copy and paste them so you can print them out.... but make note that's only for those who ask me and if you don't ask and do it, that is copy writing all my stuff!
  3. mtpspur's Avatar
    I'm off starting Thursday for 4 days in which I keep lying to Meg about finishing HER story. I'm adding you to the list. I'll just back track thru your blog. Thanks. Unlikely to print--the long suffering one guards her printer like a mother hen and with the price of ink cartridges. Maybe when she graduates.
  4. Shurtugal's Avatar
    lol.... kk.
  5. Shurtugal's Avatar
    kiz paws... i'm waiting for your thoughts!