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Reflections on the puddle of life

Urban Haiku

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Updated 07-05-2009 at 06:29 AM by TheFifthElement

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  1. kiz_paws's Avatar
    How I L♥VE haiku ... and yours are wonderful! Complete stories all wrapped up into the 5-7-5 restriction ---- LOVE IT! My favorite of this selection were:
    Go, Fifth, Go!
    Updated 07-05-2009 at 06:30 AM by TheFifthElement (poems deleted)
  2. 1n50mn14's Avatar
    This was beautiful and depressing all in one.

    Impatient cars pause
    in a queue. In the distance
    keening sirens cry.

    ^My favourite.
  3. 's Avatar
    yeah but I sense suburban and rural in there too.
  4. 's Avatar
    Perhaps that's because what is 'urban' in UK is more suburban or rural in US? Most of our 'cities' are probably the size of a small town over there Anyways, all were observed whilst treading the streets of my local 'city'.