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No Time For Roses

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There's no time for roses
I've papers to see
problems to solve
with investment strategy

I can't feel the raindrops
falling softly from the sky
there's a wrestling match that beckons
hush, he's getting that guy

Yes the tea is lovely dear
in the china painted gay
but I'm off to play some football
with the guys, you know, today

Your hugs are warm and beckoning
but I leave town in an hour
to straighten company business
maybe I can send you some lovely flowers

* * *

Love is planted in our hearts
and needs tending all the time
don't give me roses when I'm dead
dear sweet lover mine


K♥z
-- Feb08-08


I submitted this poem in the poetry section already, and I have tucked it here in my blog --kind of for me to keep track of my written stuff. Sorry if I seem like I repeat myself all the time...

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K♥z
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  1. motherhubbard's Avatar
    I'm glad you posted it here. I like it. I thought it would end with something about don't send me flowers, I only wanted your time- but I was not disappointed. You're a lovely poet!
  2. mtpspur's Avatar
    I found it a bit unsettling. For some reason I keep thinking this is Dale Arden talking to Flash Gordon or Jane Porter to Tarzan. Well written--you do pathos well.
  3. 1n50mn14's Avatar
    =/ Such truth to your poem, I'm contemplative now. I want to look at my own life and see if I appreciate small beauty.
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  5. kiz_paws's Avatar
    B, that was really really cute and unexpected **hugs to you**