Halls of the Dark Muse

Lovely lovely!! :p :p

Thank you..

I like the first stanza Muse. I like the syllable count of each line 6-5-4-4. And with the ryhmes it gives it a nice texture. I wonder if the poem would be better if you stuck to that pattern for each stanza.

Oops, that was a mistake on the syllabel count, I always miscount my syllables. it is suppose to be 8-4-4-4 per line