A circle! we did it!
by , 02-04-2008 at 04:12 PM (944 Views)
so, we have made complete cirlcle!!!!!!!!!!!!can you believe that! from the very first time i posted a random thought till now....
on the computar it says i have typed 31 pages till this point. so what do you think of it? who's your favorite character? do you have any ideas of what going to happen? i want your- yes your- appion! here's the next part! we've made a complete cirlcle people!
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Auni walked into the large room and shuttered at the sound of her foot steps echoing. The room was round and the ceiling was at least 50 meters above her head, the walls were bare except the dark silver stair case that spiraled up the wall. Auni thought that at the top of the stair case it might be possible to go to the heavens. But now that was not her problem, she had been kidnapped from her kidnappers and now was is an ancient mystical castle that was thousands of years old. Her hand had been slowly becoming more and more of it's own mind and it did concern Auni. What would happen if she completely lost control of her hand, not just when in danger but on a day to day basis; where it would start to glow and wield people around. Auni squeezed the thought out of her mind when her hand twitched and gave off a slight glow- she was not alone in the room any longer.
"Look how her hand glows," a voice cam from the darkness, " It must be-"
"Quiet you fool!" said another voice, " You want her to know we are here?"
"Who are you?" Auni shouted out the voices. " And what do you want from me?"
"Told you she would hear us."
Then the a bright light shattered the gray darkness and the room shown silver. After shielding her eyes Auni looked up to see two figures high up on the steps. Then suddenly one jumped down. Fool! That thing will plummet to his death! Auni thought as she covered her eyes so not to witness the splatter of blood. But no shatter of blood was made and when Auni looked up in front of her stood and tall figure. He had a long face and playful eyes. He was no shorter then seven feet and had fiery red hair. And as Auni studied him she saw his pointed ears. An elf! The next one beside him jumped down and the air surrounding had the same reaction as the first. A gust of wind pounded threw the air when the elf landed but not a sound.
"I am Aefuued." said the first elf with the fiery red hair. He slightly bowed. Then gestured toward the one next to him. "This is my fool of a brother Gejyz. You must be Auni."
"How do you know my name?" she asked stricken.
"Here all names are reveled before they are spoken," said the second, Gejyz. "That is, once you have lived here for a hundred years. It is a practice one must learn."
"Where am I?"
"They did not tell you? Of course not, you were unconscious the whole trip. You, Auni, are in Nyeymouel."
"I have never heard of that country."
The two elves looked at each other then smiled down at her.
"How rood of us," Gejyz said.
"Yes how rood, " agreed Aefuued.
"You must see, Fia, Lady of the elves."
The two elves turned on there heels and gestured for her to follow them. Timidly Auni did and left the strange gray room behind them.
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Auni entered another room. The walls were decorated with strange, beautiful plants. Windows lit the room brightly. Across from the entrance sat a throne ordained with an ivory green sheet and curtain. Sitting on the throne was an elf lady with long purple hair that rolled over the side like a river. Aefuued and Gejyz bowed.
"Welcome to Nyeymouel, Auni," said the elf standing from her seat. "I am Fia, Lady of the elves." She turned her attention to the two brothers, "Aefuued, Gejyz, thank you for bringing such a special guest here. It is an honor you should be proud of."
They smiled and shifted their feet. The entrance door flew open and Auni spun around. Kioshi walked in, his blonde hair catching the sun and his vibrant, pale blue shown. He walked past Auni a couple steps and made a small bow.
"Kioshi," said Fia, excitement clear in her voice, "Nyeymouel is so glad to have you back! And I am in dept to you. What way could we repay you?"
"Let me teach Auni," gasps went through the crowd when Kioshi exclaimed this. Fia's face twisted in painful thought.
“It is not normal for one without a master’s symbol to teach another.”
“Nor is letting in a foreigner without testing them harshly. I would not train her alone, Goxacu would help.”
“Is this true?” Fia asked Goxacu who was standing in the gathering crowd.
“Yes, I have agreed,” he said.
“Then your request is in pending, we will answer you by tomorrow when the Kios sun has risen over us on the west side.”
Kioshi nodded his head then turned around and looked at Auni.
“I have brought you something,” he gestured to the door. Auni looked and beheld a small girl.
“Madoline!” shouted Auni and Madoline ran into her arms.
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can you believe that! from the very first time i posted a random thought till now....
on the computar it says i have typed 31 pages till this point. so what do you think of it? who's your favorite character? do you have any ideas of what going to happen? i want your- yes your- appion! here's the next part! we've made a complete cirlcle people!