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Unconscious and bloody

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Here's the next. Bloody! i need another opener!
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Oara had made a pair of glasses years ago that enabled her to be able to see even though she was blind. The glasses captured the surroundings and projected them into wires which were connected to the side of her heard and sent her brain the images at the same rate it saw them.

“What’s different from the old glasses.” asked Kisohi as he came into the cottage full of every type of gadget the universe had to offer.

“Heh, night vision,” she replied picking the glasses up and handing them to Kioshi.

“You don’t night vision.”

“I know, but it’s cool right? I was going to but lazar beams, but night vision seemed more better.”

Kioshi nodded his head and took out his giant sword, slicking buttons that made it fully extend to it six and a half feet of length. He smiled at the remembrance when Oara first handed it to him.

“If you’re ready, I’ll choose out a vehicle from out back and we can leave.”

“You’ll take the tricluvert, I finished making a hover board.”
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Tyler walked into the cave of the canyon. His men had just moved aside the giant bolder and immediately Tyler had found the sleeping girls. I’m surprised with you Kioshi, Tyler thought to himself. I would think you’d try to hide the girls better.

He quietly walked over to Eligantia and Madoline.

“Sleeping dust,” He mused coming close enough to smell its faint perfumes. “Men, don’t bother killing the younger child, she is of certainty no harm but might play a fatal play in our game.”
He leaned over Eligantia and examined her. Then pulling out his three pistoled gun that’s sheet was strapped onto his left leg, Tyler aimed it at her.

“Sweet dreams, doll,” whispered he, “Or rather, sweet death.”
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Walking into another white room, Auni saw this time Uugi was there and another young person who looked reasonable like him. Across his face where terrible scares that looked like a tiger had attached him. He looked at her with a look that made chills run up Auni's back.

"Welcome back, Auni," Uugi said his voice still cold and chilling. "I'm sorry for the disturbance yesterday. But those things are common here. It is rare that the defeated get out alive or dearly injured. Today, we will test your fighting ability with my son, Ishi."

Uugi nodded at Ishi and de stepped forward. He was much larger then her by several inches and his tighter clothing reveled his masculine body.

“I don’t know how to fight,” Auni said in an ashamed voice.

“Then this’ll be child’s play.” Murmured Ishi barely audible by Auni but Uugi seemed to have caught it.

Without warning Uugi shouted, “Go!” And Ishi ran up to her swiftly, faster then any man Auni had ever heard of. Suddenly she felt a sharp pain in her chin and realized she was on the floor across the room. Something warm filled her mouth. Ishi was rushing at her and she felt her right hand prickle. Then it thrust itself forward, shrieking out a blue light and sending Ishi viciously against the wall. It left a large dent. Auni stood up and spit out blood. Ishi burned with anger. He pulled out his gun and started shouting at her while he ran around her.

“None of that!” Uugi shouted. Blue light jetted out of her hand and shielded her completely. The bullets stopped when the hit the shield and turned back. One brazed Ishi’s arm, knocking the gun out of his grip. He flinched at the burning pain went up his arm. He raced at her again and this time Auni was the one to thrust her hand out, sending Ishi against the window that separated them from space. The large window shattered to pieces an their hair flew around wildly. Ishi jumped back into the room and charged at Auni but he didn’t hit her. He ran past. She turned quickly to watch him approach the wall at full speed. What is he doing? Auni thought rapidly then suddenly Ishi was running up the wall. Ten feet...twenty feet...thirty... he was on the roof right above her. She watched him fall looking at her, it felt like everything was going slow and she couldn’t to block. Oof! Ishi fell upon her, like fire his eyes burned. Pinning her right arm down with his knee, he brought his fist down into the center of her ribs. Auni heard a terrible crack and her lungs felt like they where on fire. Another blow was made on her left cheek. Then another again on her ribs. Someone was shouting behind her, but she couldn't hear him. She could hardly even feel pain... All she saw was Ishi's face burning down at her. His hair whipped around his face and punches blurred her vision. The sight of a demon couldn't have frightened her as much.

Finally someone pulled Ishi off. She rolled over, spitting out all the blood and part of a tooth. Then pain was unbearable and she lay back down. Unconscious and bloody.
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  1. BulletproofDork's Avatar
    Stupid Ishi! What's in his head?! And Tyler . . . ! Is on my blacklist. He killed Eligantia?
  2. Shurtugal's Avatar
    but isn't the ending perfect? "sweet dreams, doll. Rather sweet death." i mean, it was bloody wicked! (seriously) and Eligantia was turning out to be a pointless character in the story... she was like there for no purpuse. and ishi isn't stupid, he just has m-a-j-o-r anger issues.
  3. andave_ya's Avatar
    Goodness! If that isn't the sign of a good author...or at least a blooming author...than I don't know what is. If you can kill off a nice character without a second thought then I envy you.
  4. kiz_paws's Avatar
    Wow! Awesome excitement! But is this the end for Auni? Or will things continue?
  5. Shurtugal's Avatar
    i feel bad. (does that sound stupid?) 'cause i killed somone who really wasn't i need to be killed. i feel like i almost just wished a real person to death. like "you are no use, Good death." and-boink- they are dead. scary how much power you have in the story.
    and kiz, of course it isn't the ending! though i won't say anymore then that! you must read to find out! lol *evil laugh*