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Cloud Song

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Dark Muse
, 12-22-2007 at 11:04 PM (1310 Views)
Cloud Song

Sweet pink blush
stretched across the sky
the rosy tint
as the suns goodbye

Soft powder blue
merges through
to hold on to the days
remains

Soon though
gentle colored clouds
will be dissolved,
transformed into nights
eerie mist

With moons-eye
hanging above
just barely seen through
a hazy light fog

Just a spot
of round silver
to light the way
in blinded haze.

Updated 08-20-2008 at 09:38 PM by Dark Muse

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  1. motherhubbard's Avatar
    Loved it! Beautiful and serene
  2. Dark Muse's Avatar
    Thank you..
  3. motherhubbard's Avatar
    the season has changed so I saw the moon out of a different window this morning and it was beautiful- large and yellow like the sun, bright against the blue-black sky- I thought of your cloud poem and wished I could write one so well about the moon
  4. kiz_paws's Avatar
    I enjoyed this poem very much. Your opening line was exquisite, your phrases very colorful and well placed. Yup, I liked it!