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let me know how this sounds, i'm just wondering.

Auni walked into the large room and shuttered at the sound of her foot steps echoing. The room was round and the cieling was at least 50 meters above her head, the walls were bare except the dark silvar stair case that spirald up the wall. Auni thought that at the top of the stair case it might be possible to go to the heavens. But now that was not her problem, she had been kidnapped from her kidnappers and now was is an acient mystical castle that was thousands of years old. Her hand had been slowly becoming more and more of it's own mind and it did consern Auni. What would happen if she completly lost control of her hand, not just when in danger but on a day to day bassis; where it would start to glow and weild people around like it did just the other day. Auni squeezed the thought out of her mind when her hand twitched and gave off a slight glow- she was not alone in the room any longer.

"Look how her hand glows," a voice cam from the darkness, " It must be-"

"Quiet you fool!" said another voice, " You want her to know we are here?"

"Who are you?" Auni shouted out the voices. " And what do you want from me?"

"Told you she would hear us."

Then the a bright light shattered the gray darkness and the room shown silvar. After shielding her eyes Auni looked up to see two figures high up on the steps. Then suddenly one jumped down. Fool! That thing will plumit to his death! Auni thought as she covered her eyes so not to wittness the splatter of blood. But no shatter of blood was made and when Auni looked up in front of her stood and tall figure. He had a long face and playful eyes. He was no shorter then seven feet and had firy red hair. And as Auni studied him she saw his pointed ears. An elf! The next one beside him jumped down and the air surrounding had the same reaction as the first. A gust of wind pounded threw the air when the elf landed but not a sound.

"I am Aefuued." said the first elf with the firy red hair. He slightly bowed. Then gestured toward the one next to him. "This is my fool of a brother Gejyz. YOu must be Auni."

"How do you know my name?" she asked stricken.

"Here all names are revieled before they are spoken," said the second, Gejyz. "That is,once you have lived here for a hundred years. It is a practice one must learn."

"Where am I?"

"They did not tell you? Of course not, you were unconsceince the whole trip. You, Auni, are in Nyeymouel."

"I have never heard of that country."

The two elves looked at each other then smiled down at her.

"How rood of us," Gejyz said.

"Yes how rood, " agreed Aefuued.

"You must see, Fia, Lady of the elves."

The two elves turned on there heels and gustered for her to follow them. Timidly Auni did and left the strange gray room behind them.
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Whew... i just typed that out of randomness. pretty good, eh?
So that is one scene in a story i have begun to right... It won't let me just forget it and it haunts me at night. So this morning i gave in and let it win. hope you liked it. yar probably confussed because i kinda am in the middle of everything. You don't the past of Auni and what the heck i was talking about with her hand. but you'll under stand later when i start from the first chapter. lol see ya-argetlam