so finally share my writing
by , 12-10-2007 at 04:45 PM (832 Views)
you know, i just thought about this... i joined here on litnet to share my writing and to read other writing to understand different ideas. hmmm... i think i failed on that part of the whole thing.
guess i should start catchin' up, huh? ok... here me goes.
(a warning to the wise: half this stuff i wrote i write out from no where. some of these ideas are surprisingly in my mind.)
Commitment
My devotion for you ,
Are like those's of a faother.
My commitment to you,
Will never die.
Your life to me is more then my own;
And when things get dark,
I will always be brighter.
My trustment of you,
Can't ever fade.
My dreams of you,
Are always the foundest.
Your smile to me
Is like that of above.
Your eyes are flying and are as sweet as a dove.
Your beautifulness,
Is like that of an ocean.
Your fairness,
Can't ever be put down.
Our friendship,
Will always go on.
Evan when we're old,
Starting now when we're young.
Dance!
Ah, laying here in my bed,
Night has come calling to my head.
We soar through life of yesterday.
The fairies are joyful as they play.
Time is no matter,
Life is at stop...
Dashing through the window,
Dashiing through the pain,
Is a fairy of dreams.
She is like sun beams,
Oh, so gold.
Dancing through the dreams,
Of the unexpesting world
She is here to confort,
To dry up the tears,
Those of the begotten,
The unloved are here.
Life are her wings, so beautiful and sad.
They glisten in the moonlight;
She is on the forsaken path
The monsteres are growling;
Life is at steer.
Darkness surronds her.
What is not to fear?
It cloaks her like blanket,
So ugly and dark.
Fear not, beloved child!
Do not be afraid,
For this is an epic
Of love, joy, and pain.
It is life as we know;
In a fantisy realm.
Enchanted and mystified,
Oh, we know so well.
Dance and fly and soar like the bird!
It is time to prevail this evil, accursed world.
ok, so it might not make sence unless you now that i'm crazy and never write in theme... i just write. i got to go, school is calling my name. (meanly if i may add) but i still got to go.-argetlam



