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Poem: When Death Lays Low

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I found this poem while rooting the other day. Figured I'd post my non-imagist, emotional, anachonristically styled, archaic poem here, since it's trendy at the moment to post verse in one's blog:

WHEN DEATH LAYS LOW

It’s hot as hell, but hotter still
the fiery sun and scorching sand
that beat and blaze above and below
to burn the backs of better men,
of men laid low in steely Iraq
or unsung heroes West of Tehran.

The bursting flames of combative battlefields
make cowards brave and gods of men,
and fleeting bullets through blood-sullied hills
sing of nations saved or ideas defended
through graveyards paved with epithets
of patriotic lives that have ended.

Yet there is greatness even where loss is great,
When sacrifice serves to preserve the soul,
and men soar highest in a martyred state
and plummet down low with a selfish goal,
but what attends a youth whose fate
lies in self-imposed wounds
or by mistake is stole?

Tis hardest then, I think,
to answer for accident’s employ
when the fleeting bullet mutilates
or frothy sea claims
the life of just an adolescent boy.
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  1. Niamh's Avatar
    Aw Countess! That poem was amazing!
  2. mtpspur's Avatar
    Very timely considering son Dan was shot at and returned fire in Iraq. No offense taken and I really tried to 'get' this poem. We make an extra effort when it's someone I follow on the forums. But sigh, comics before poetry everytime for me. It did seem to have a beauty to it. I often think your fire burns bright to steal a quote from the old Wisegiy series.
  3. andave_ya's Avatar
    That was indeed amazing, Countess!
    sing of nations saved or ideas defended
    I loved that line. Ideas are worthy of dying for. There's a lot in this poem I want to comment on but Bulletproof's angling for the computer.
  4. kiz_paws's Avatar
    I enjoyed the poem but found the last few lines to be totally awesome. What a touching ending.
  5. B-Mental's Avatar
    Thats an awesome poem Countess. What have you been doing? Hanging out with jon1 lately, lol. Keep it up.