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Lit Net in Space ~ Prelude

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The first sun of the day had just cleared the horizon, marking the recurrence of the hot and active season. Wondrous rays illuminated with the sparkling brilliance of diamonds emanated along a distant anonymous range of lesser mountains. A muffled wheeze of a sleeping chamber slowly releasing its atmosphere into the stale air inside the camp. The incoming rays from the sun slowly recharged the mining ship as its first crew member was regaining consciousness. He lay there for couple of minutes while his head cleared. Eventually, he sat up and stretched his muscles, working out the inactivity that always came with extended naps. His hands flitted over a keypad on the wall, and the ship was suddenly alive again. Lights flickered and flashed as they warmed slowly. The ventilation kicked in fluttering as the fans started to cycle the atmosphere. Shields opened on the small portal to his room, and he reached to the wall for support as he stood out of his bed.

The red sun was quickly illuminating the landscape, and he was encouraged by the view. "Same old same old," he coarsely whispered to himself. He headed off to the lavatory. A body can only hibernate for so long, and he needed to release the accumulated toxins of a three month nap. Soon he was wide awake with a shower, shave and fresh clothes. His steps were light and tender as he readjusted to moving around, and headed to the command room. He turned on the ambiance lights, cycled his computers, and checked out the craft's systems. Once he had verified that everything was normal, he headed off to make his first meal. A toasted biscuit, reconstituted peach jam, a mug and a large pot of coffee were placed on a tray, and he delicately balanced this on the way back to the command room.

He set the tray down on the center table, turned on the hologram, and walked over to the communications console. A brief scan told him all he needed to know, nothing out of the usual...personal messages for the crew, no emergencies, no end to the universe, the usual high priority messages from the company, and the vessel log for arriving craft.

Two hours later he was just finishing his check list when the door to the command center opened. "Hey Skipper! How'd you sleep?" he asked in a playful too cheerful manner.

A low voice crackled, "Not bad Digger. How about you?"

"Like a baby, even needed to have my diaper changed! Oh, I ain't a digger no more, remember?"

"Yeah, don't remind me...might just be the second worst thing I ever did," the Captain replied. "So Aimus, how's my baby?"

Aimus grinned, gestured like he was stroking something in his arms, "Purring like a baby Stan, like a little kitten. Promoting me was the second worst thing you ever did, huh? What was the first?"

The Captain laughed, reached out to tussle Aimus' hair saying, "Well don't ask your mother, she promised me she wouldn't tell a soul." His smile was broad, and his laughter boomed in the silent command room. Amos looked perplexed at the comment, and Captain Stanislaw only laughed harder. "You do anything right before I awoke?"

"Just finished the checklist. Everything is good to go."

"What about coffee, or do I have to do everything around here?"

"Just made the second pot."

Stan walked over to the pot, and looked for a mug, not seeing one he walked over to Amos, and took his. "Looks like you forgot to bring yourself a mug." He topped the mug up with coffee, took a swig, and stated, "Gonna get a shower and change. She's all yours. You did good Aimus, keep it up."

Aimus smiled as the Captain exited, and yelled back to Stan, "Its good to see you too Sir!"

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This is just a prelim to a story I've been working on, but I thought I might try to add names from the litnet forums...when applicable. I haven't asked permission, but I don't know how long I'll keep this going, just like to have the access to some good names. Anyone that doesn't want a character name based off of their name, kindly PM me, and I'll change it. Cheers B
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  1. kiz_paws's Avatar
    This is great. And feel free to use my name, I am not sensitive about that! Look forward to some more instalments on this tale -- Yay B!
  2. andave_ya's Avatar
    Hahah, I'm going to look forward to reading this. Sounds really good!
  3. applepie's Avatar
    I look foward to reading B. I'm behind on everyone's stuff, but I'm trying to make more time:)
  4. AimusSage's Avatar
    Make me the villain and you've got a deal. Not to tell you what to write, but he has to be a bit of a megalomaniac, with a tendency to over explain his intentions, giving the heroes ample time to devise a plan to stop him from destroying the universe, which due to their ineptitude almost fails completely, but thanks to the villains ability to hire the worst marksmen in the universe, they pull through after all.

    haha, just kidding though, use it in whatever way you like, make me a doofus, a comic sidekick, anything, just remember that I'm someone's intellectual property. but you have my written permission to use the name, not the actual character, which doesn't fit anyway, or so I think, what would a king do on a mining vessel, and such an old fashioned one at that.

    Props to an excellent and promising start. I look forward to the rest.
  5. 's Avatar
    This is a great beginning, B, I sense you can pull a full novel out of this one with the strong beginning. It leaves asking many questions, and you've succeeded in such a short space by giving the characters a distinct personality.

    Quote Originally Posted by quote
    A body can only hibernate for so long, and he needed to release the accumulated toxins of a three month nap.
    this line stuck out as it releases a whole host of sensations about the character.

    What else can I say besides, where's the rest?
  6. B-Mental's Avatar
    Thanks for the comments everyone...yeah jon1 I started with a bunch of non-related stories, and the concept for gelled overnight...or thought about it for a year or two, and it started to fall together. I'm working out details, and researching a lot now. I will say that my entries will be short, but are mainly to give me the essence and put something together. A condensed thing...who knows, a novel would be incredible ). Kiz, you are already in...looking forward to sketching in your character in the next couple of days, and then introducing her.

    I have a ways to go on my writing skills, and this requires more research...I'll try to write some every week, if I don't get too busy.

    PS- I expect that many more people will be introduced in the next couple of entries.
  7. B-Mental's Avatar
    I've been toying with the name Amos...changing forthwith to Aimus. I believe it is less accompanied with racism and actually fits the space theme. Still waiting to see if Aimus is a bad motor finger, or just one of the coolest dudes in the galaxy. Rolling the dice on that one...lol
  8. mtpspur's Avatar
    Ok finally got the chance to catch with the backlog of reading. Still way behind on Meg's story I might add. I liked your opening very much. You have a gift for describing nature that I can see the beauty of in the mind's eye. The rest reminded me of the opening to Alien (1st movie) and that's not a bad start/thing. Curious as to what this crew is up to. Any chance they are interplanetary drillers as well? Will read with continued interest.
  9. B-Mental's Avatar
    actually they are miners Rich.