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20 pills and it's not enough

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, 10-19-2007 at 12:19 PM (984 Views)

20 pills and it's not enough.
23 and you'll never hear my story.

A little blue in a sea of green
A little space, some time and space between;

A little drink, some poison 'ere we part,
A little wet, a torn-up little heart.

I need a bag, a rubber-band and a friend.
A harmonica if I played, but this shall be the end.

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Countess - 10-19-2007 12:33 PM
I like it but now I'm really worried about you!
NikolaiI - 10-19-2007 12:49 PM
Thanks. Yes, but I know for a fact the world is better off without me.
andave_ya - 10-19-2007 03:26 PM
Well that's enchanting. How do you "know for a fact" that the world is better off without you. Do you know every single person on the planet and their opinion of you? Do you know nobody who likes you? What about the people here on the LitNet? You don't think we'll miss you if you decide to up and kill yourself? Please, what kind of logic is this?
littlewing53 - 10-19-2007 04:19 PM
hi nik...well said..i liked it the first time i read it...i was trying to figure out if this was a rocker song you were sharing or something you had written...i can see by some of the responses it is something you have written...yes no?...writing is so cathartic....and you do it so well...i want to believe by your writings you have a zest for life and would not leave so quickly...lw
Bakiryu - 10-19-2007 06:40 PM
Don't you dare again! The poem is ok but you know what I mean