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Six Stanzas.

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NikolaiI
, 09-16-2007 at 03:35 PM (987 Views)
Reel, wheel, turn,
Look,
On the mountain, looking down.

Speak, feel, burn,
What we know is down inside,
Far away.

Sing, back and forth
It's a song
For the broken

I am under,
But I'll go down inside
Far away,

It is over.
On a cliff,
Looking down.
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  1. Bakiryu's Avatar
    Я люблю это! This is beautiful, quick moving, it has a kind of dangerous speed to it, the speed of colliding meteors, of crashing mountains.....
  2. NikolaiI's Avatar
    And yet the lines get shorter, hm. :) I look at line length a lot...I dunno this could be better but thank you for the compliment!!! And I am so impressed with your Russian, even if that's the only phrase you know. :)
  3. crazefest456's Avatar
    This one seems like a downward spiraling life...Like being self destructive or something. I see the speed that Baki's talking about, and then I see the immediate "rock bottom" that instantly comes after that...Nice.