help with essay!
by , 09-12-2007 at 04:34 PM (1026 Views)
I needed help writing this essay, thanks to certain ppl, i'm not sure if it's any good so please, help out a yougin, it's a bit of something and very very opinionated...lol
We all feel something. It may be a touch of misery, a poke of bliss, or even a wittle sprinkle of zeal. Why or how do we feel this way? It always comes from something. Perhaps a kiss from your lover, or because someone made you feel isolated and unloved. We all have or sob stories, we all have our tales, so who feels it the most?
The last time I remember crying was because my moms had truly gotten on my nerves (as usual). I was having a huge mood swing day, and I wasn’t enjoying not a bit of it. My System of a Down CD was blasting through my ears and I felt my eyes go watery and all I could think of was, “Why in the hell am I crying?!” Well, we tend to get emotional and it gets to you like nothing else.
It’s a fact that we (chicks) are more susceptible to our emotions than dudes. When you’re in a relationship with a guy, you offer more than he does (and at times you won’t even know it). He’ll show interest in kissing, or getting touchy/flirty with you. Does he care? Whatever you do, don't expect me to answer that.
When we’re “beefing” with another chick, we flip out, we cuss someone out, or sometimes we just go straight to the “a** kicking” stage. Yeah guys get into too, but it’s for personal reasons, it ends up being a matter of pride, a hurt ego, or just to make them look good (in other words for their rep.)
Dudes are just 2 eyes and a pleasure wagon. But us, oh we’re much more complicated we’re 3 eyes and a pleasure wagon. And yes you can laugh at this but think about it. With 2 eyes you can see only oh so much, but with 3 you can see so much more (however there are those who choose to keep that 3rd eye closed). So now you know what New York meant when she said, “I know how he feels I can see it in my 3rd eye.” (referring to "I Love New York")
All you gotta do is look.
(2 words have been cut out for appropriate useage, lol, so sorry it doesn’t sound right at one point for me…)



