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Away with the Fairies- The Travel Diary of an Irish WebFairy

new titleless poem

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Niamh
, 08-28-2007 at 12:27 PM (1284 Views)
As i lie down to rest
my head is filled with thoughts
of future emotions and troubles past.
Sometimes eyes glisten,
tears forming on surface fighting for release.
Darkness overcomes,
And as i lie dreaming
My dreams are filled with thoughts
of future emotions and troubles past.
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  1. kiz_paws's Avatar
    I liked the way the poem read, how the ending re-capsules the initial thought. Hmmm in reading my comment, it sounds odd -- hope you know what I mean... Lovely poem, Niamh.
  2. Countess's Avatar
    I like it, although it sounds like a eulogy. I wrote my epiteth (mssp but I"m not looking it up - too tired) for my gravestone and it sound similiar:

    And as she walks away
    The dusk of another day
    Fades into twilight serene
    Just close your eyes and dream.

    See the similiarity? You're not writing your gravestone heading, are you?
  3. Niamh's Avatar
    no countess i'm not. It's simly a reflection of how my mind has been lately. Constant thoughts surrounding both my waking thoughts and dreams.
    Kiz i understand what you mean!