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TheWait

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littlewing53
, 08-28-2007 at 07:37 PM (1229 Views)


didn't seem likely
that one step from the edge
would lead the way here
hazy lines of secret doors
open to tree-lined streets
filled w/purple flowers smiling songs

empty benches
filled with unseen faces
chatting loudly reminiscing

anxiety stops to visit
certain of acceptance
and finds no vacant seat

laughter crowds the air
hugging over-filled suitcases
waiting patiently
for the big bus
that takes them home
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  1. kiz_paws's Avatar
    Wow, you made me feel like I was there, in the station...
  2. littlewing53's Avatar
    hi kizzo...again, thanks for the comments...this one has been in my head for sometime, lurking in the corners calling out everyone once in awhile...ever since i read cs lewis book mere christianity.....that's where this place is...have you read it?
  3. kiz_paws's Avatar
    No, I have not read it. You seem to have sooooo many poems inside you, glad that you are sharing them with us here.