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Living Breathing Contradiction...

Flowers

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stephofthenight
, 07-15-2007 at 07:31 PM (1182 Views)
Fluttering around in the breeze
Lounging in the sunshine soaking up the rays
One by one they dance in the wind
Wonderous, gracefull movments like rolling hills
External grace given throughout
Reliving every breath taking moment
Some loving memorys are ment to be shared with a beautiful rose

my first attempt at this style of poetry,
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  1. kiz_paws's Avatar
    I enjoyed the pictures that this poem produced for me. Keep them coming, Steph!
  2. Neo_Sephiroth's Avatar
    Then I say you are successful! Good job!
  3. stephofthenight's Avatar
    I read back to what I have wrote. Some of it I find pathetic, others make me think, did I really write this. I guess that part of my life is over with But it was amazing while lived...