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Another Movie Version of The Great Gatsby

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I guess I understand why the movie industry keeps trying to put The Great Gatsby on screen. It's a great story, great memorable characters, and peaks to high drama. It's colorful, a story of bright pastels, has wonderful, direct conflict, and is deep in back story, so even though it's roughly only 200 pages of a novel, its width is years. F. Scott Fitzgerald condenses the story perfectly, a bright jewel.

So it's perfect for the movies? No matter how often they've tried - six, seven times? - it's been a disappointment. It doesn't seem to translate well to the screen. Why? Well, for one reason the novel is so great that it can never be rivaled. The novel was written and every reproduction can only be a shadow of it. But there's another reason. The great excesses of the story, of the characters, of the milieu can only be suggested by language. Once you put the excess on screen, embody them into flesh and blood actors, and create a flashy backdrop, the musical note changes. It hits off key, looks corny, becomes banal and possibly mawkish.

It's Fitzgerald's prose that gives the story credibility. How do you put this (from chapter two, a description of a wasteland just outside the city) on the screen?

This is a valley of ashes--a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens; where ashes take the forms of houses and chimneys and rising smoke and, finally, with a transcendent effort, of men who move dimly and already crumbling through the powdery air. Occasionally a line of gray cars crawls along an invisible track, gives out a ghastly creak, and comes to rest, and immediately the ash-gray men swarm up with leaden spades and stir up an impenetrable cloud, which screens their obscure operations from your sight.
Or this passage where Nick (the first person narrator) describes what makes Gatsby so alluring:
He smiled understandingly-much more than understandingly. It was one of those rare smiles with a quality of eternal reassurance in it, that you may come across four or five times in life. It faced--or seemed to face--the whole external world for an instant, and then concentrated on you with an irresistible prejudice in your favor. It understood you just as far as you wanted to be understood, believed in you as you would like to believe in yourself.
Or this passage where Nick projects the disillusionment that Gatsby must have had at the end:

He must have felt that he had lost the old warm world, paid a high price for living too long with a single dream. He must have looked up at an unfamiliar sky through frightening leaves and shivered as he found what a grotesque thing a rose is and how raw the sunlight was upon the scarcely created grass. A new world, material without being real, where poor ghosts, breathing dreams like air, drifted fortuitously about...like that ashen, fantastic figure gliding toward him through the amorphous trees.
And still one more, Nick's reflection of the Gatsby story as it fit into an uniquely American experience:

Most of the big shore places were closed now and there were hardly any lights except the shadowy, moving glow of a ferryboat across the Sound. And as the moon rose higher the inessential houses began to melt away until gradually I became aware of the old island here that flowered once for Dutch sailors' eyes-a fresh, green breast of the new world. Its vanished trees, the trees that had made way for Gatsby's house, had once pandered in whispers to the last and greatest of all human dreams; for a transitory enchanted moment man must have held his breath in the presence of this continent, compelled into an aesthetic contemplation he neither understood nor desired, face to face for the last time in history with something commensurate to his capacity for wonder.
That rhythmic prose and that glorious imagery just can't be captured in film. Fitzgerald studied Joseph Conrad's prose so diligently, and here the student surpassed the master, at least in this novel.

So there's going to be another rendition of the movie. I believe it's going to be out around Christmas. The trailer is out. See what you think:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rARN6agiW7o



That is horrible. That is garish, and not even remotely in a good way, if it's possible for garish to be conceived to be good.

There's a line that the movie version has Daisy say. It's at 1:17 minutes into the trailer. "You always look so cool."

I can assure you F. Scott Fitzgerald never wrote that line, could never possibly consider writing that line, and is probably turning over in his grave over that teenybopper line. The whole movie from this trailer strikes me as juvenile.

Now it may be that the movie is better than the trailer, but that would be unusual.
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  1. PrinceMyshkin's Avatar
    First of all, I want to salute your always sensitive and full-hearted response to any piece of literature to which you're responding. Here I salute your valiant defense of the original work. "Gatsby" is somewhat more like a great lyrical poem, which would need an equally sensitive script and director to recreate it on screen.
  2. OrphanPip's Avatar
    Baz Luhrman's version of Romeo and Juliet was far from faithful either. To be fair though, I don't think he much tries to make a faithful adaptation.

    It looks, visually at least, typical of his style.

    Also, Daisy does say "you always look so cool" in the book. I checked and its in chapter 7. Fitzgerald uses the word a lot actually, it was a new and trendy word for the period, after all. It's kind of typical of Daisy since she is a bit vacuous.
    Updated 05-27-2012 at 08:55 PM by OrphanPip
  3. Virgil's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by OrphanPip
    Also, Daisy does say "you always look so cool" in the book. I checked and its in chapter 7. Fitzgerald uses the word a lot actually, it was a new and trendy word for the period, after all. It's kind of typical of Daisy since she is a bit vacuous.
    OMG you're right! He does. I went down to the basement to find my book in my boxes of what has become my library. There it is in chapter seven. I have to eat my words.

    But, if you look at the passage I don't think Daisy is using it like a teenybopper. The group of five, Daisy, Tom, Gatsby, Nick, and Jordan are together on an exasperatingly hot day, and they are trying to fight the heat and think up ways to cool off. Daisy does turn to Gatsby and tell him he always looks so cool, and says it twice, but it's in reference to fighting the heat and perspiration. Now it's possible she means it as a double entendre.

    So I also looked up "cool" as slang in my Partridge's Concise Dictionary of Slang and Unconventional English, and he traces the word back to 1945. It comes out of jazz lingo. It's possible it went further back, but it's also unlikely that Partridge (who is the most famous and thorough cataloger of English slang) would have missed a reference in such a famous work as Gatsby. I think it's probably not being used as slang in the novel.

    As to the movie, I guess you can't really judge the context by a trailer. So for now I'll have to retract criticism.

    Good find Orphan!
    Updated 05-27-2012 at 10:22 PM by Virgil
  4. Virgil's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin
    First of all, I want to salute your always sensitive and full-hearted response to any piece of literature to which you're responding. Here I salute your valiant defense of the original work. "Gatsby" is somewhat more like a great lyrical poem, which would need an equally sensitive script and director to recreate it on screen.
    Thank you Prince. This novel is a lyrical masterpiece. You're quite right to refer it that way.

    By the way, I was thinking about you a few weeks ago, thinking about how I haven't read any of your poetry in a while. I'm going to have to do a search to see some of your latest. I assume you're still putting some out on the Lit Net boards.
  5. OrphanPip's Avatar
    Yes, it's likely she's not using it in the sense of "trendy," but I think she's using it in the sense of "calm" or "detached."
  6. LadyLuck's Avatar
    Another one *sigh*. Some books should just be left books, and not made into movies, but then again some books should be made into movies to make them tolerable