the ocean always dreamed blue dreams

Wow, I don't know what to say... I really feel speechless!
The lines that struck me the most:

I'm waiting (still, always) for you
to cleave from yourself
the black felt that
entombs your soul

Oh, Qim! I'd have been moved beyond saying even if you had not dedicated it to me and Andrea (to whom I've just forwarded it.) The last two lines of S2 were so very moving, as is the whole of this. And I endorse too the lines, "to cleave from yourself" and what follows it.

(Could you possibly change the background colour? As it is I can't make out the name of the previous poster.) Edit: with some difficulty I did make out the name of Maximillian

Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin

(Could you possibly change the background colour? As it is I can't make out the name of the previous poster.) Edit: with some difficulty I did make out the name of Maximillian

That would be me, at your service

I enjoyed your poem qimi-- and the phrase "God's pocket" was really fun. I read it a couple of times. Of course, you extend that metaphor with references to a variety of raiment in the subsequent stanzas.

You're one of LitNet's finest, qimissung.

Thank You, dear Max, and Prince and Comedian.

Of course with the "God's pocket" I was going for the warmest and most loving place in the universe!

Good poem Qimi.

It is a lovely heartfelt poem Qimi. A touching honour to your friends.