When a loveboat is sailing on a romantic mirror pond, no clear glass is to be found. There's only a rippling heart in a distraught mind!
Updated 08-12-2010 at 10:56 PM by angliholic
How clever! Very well done. I like that.
Thanks, Virgil. It's no so much a clever devise as a real-life test! Ring a bell?
No, it doesn't. What is it referring to? What really captures me is the slant rhyme at the end of the lines. They almost fully rhyme, but don't, creating a rippling feeling. I don't know if you were conscious of that or it just fell into place.
Originally Posted by Virgil No, it doesn't. What is it referring to? What really captures me is the slant rhyme at the end of the lines. They almost fully rhyme, but don't, creating a rippling feeling. I don't know if you were conscious of that or it just fell into place. Thanks for the sharp ears! I didn't know that until you told me!
So simple but wonderful. To quote Virgil, "Very Well Done!"
Originally Posted by aliengirl So simple but wonderful. To quote Virgil, "Very Well Done!" Thanks, AG, for the nice words again and again. I thought you disappeared for I haven't heard from you for about two days! HOw have you been? Wish you well!
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