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To the bus stop, bareback

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This poem was originally written for the Subject poetry contest.

To the bus stop, bareback

The old barbed-wire gate --
Then the pond and cattails,
Then the big bare hill and
over sagebrush, sagebrush.

To the bus stop, bareback
Fast freedom to backtrack

From her long mane I swung
Like Christmas tinsel and
She would run, run, run, run --
The halter not halting.

To the bus stop, bareback --
The old coal railroad track.

There's always a gate at
The end of a good ride.
And there's always a bus
On the way to somewhere.

To the bus stop, bareback --
My Wyoming circle back.
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  1. 1n50mn14's Avatar
    Obviously, I would really like this. This poem rings true in the hearts of many people, I am sure.
  2. qimissung's Avatar
    When I was a child, my dream was to have a pony, and ride it to school. When I readyour poem, for a moment I was that girl again.
  3. The Comedian's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by qimissung
    When I was a child, my dream was to have a pony, and ride it to school. When I readyour poem, for a moment I was that girl again.
    Hey -- that's really cool. You know, this poem is based on what I did for a few years back in Wyoming. I used to ride a horse (bareback) to the bus-stop every day (and back again) for about two or three years.

    We had to cut across fields and lowlands to the road. It was wonderful.
  4. qimissung's Avatar
    Lucky!
  5. Haunted's Avatar
    I just love the rhythm in this poem!
  6. Virgil's Avatar
    Very nice Comedian. It captures it.
  7. Buh4Bee's Avatar
    A delightful poem.