Om

This is a lovely poem

Good to see a message from Om again Nik! Oh, and 10 directions? 10? At most I can come up with are 6: east, west, north, south, straight up, straight down. What four am I missing?

This is very nice Nik. I really liked this, "The frozen wastes of this world are melted/into an illimitable sea of love and light,"

That's a great poem, whether written in twenty seconds. or twenty hours...

Wow, thank you all so much... I don't know if any of you picked up on this, but I wrote this because I was discouraged... I won't be though! No matter what, knowing that such good people like you are here...

I would add that I adapted the last line from a similar line in an essay by Alan Watts... "The Divine Comedy. All things dissolve in laughter." (Something like that :p

Anyway i appreciate your comments! :)

and Comedian:

ten directions (十方). The spatial directions of east, southeast, south, southwest, west, northwest, north, northeast, the nadir, and the zenith.

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Breathtakingly enlightening. Don't be discouraged at all! Write more!

Thanks so much Daniel. I have written a couple others now, you might check them out and tell me what you think if you can. See you