Until we never meet again Smiling, smashing, smiting, secluded, Torn, twisted, teased, tormented, Vile, villainous, veracious, vain, wailing, waning, wacky, wrinkled old man in the mirror.
ok.... It took me a couple of reads but ok, I don't like the wacky though pretty desperate sounding though
I like how the first line and the final line pair together. A jigger of Glenlivet to you!
Alliteration! Way to go!
Good use of alliteration. I'm with nightie. Wacky seems out of place somewhat.
Wacky is an integral part though for the person i describe.