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The Nation of the Glorious Turnip

Until we never meet again

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Until we never meet again
Smiling, smashing, smiting, secluded,
Torn, twisted, teased, tormented,
Vile, villainous, veracious, vain,
wailing, waning, wacky, wrinkled
old man in the mirror.

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  1. Nightshade's Avatar
    ok....
    It took me a couple of reads but ok, I don't like the wacky though pretty desperate sounding though
  2. The Comedian's Avatar
    I like how the first line and the final line pair together. A jigger of Glenlivet to you!
  3. AuntShecky's Avatar
    Alliteration! Way to go!
  4. Niamh's Avatar
    Good use of alliteration. I'm with nightie. Wacky seems out of place somewhat.
  5. AimusSage's Avatar
    Wacky is an integral part though for the person i describe.