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Tigerlily
06-01-2003, 02:05 PM
Another poem for your perusal and discussion.

Life
It presses onward-
It is relentless,
It is mindless,
Devoid of emotion.

It rushes forward-
It is brainless,
It hurtles onwards,
An automaton.

It does not care,
It has no reason,
It does not stray from its course.

It is everything
And it is nothing.
It is inevitable.

© 2003 Maggie Jane Besterman
Della~Moon
06-01-2003, 05:22 PM
WOW! very VERY good!
Tigerlily
06-01-2003, 05:31 PM
:oops: Thank you Della. :D
tjg1098
06-02-2003, 04:50 AM
I liked it...it reminded me of that chapter in the bible describing love...1 Corinthians 13, I believe.
Tigerlily
06-02-2003, 01:56 PM
I agree tjg1098 , although I hadn't made that connection. I don't think the content and meaning is exactly the same, though. ;)