Poetry café, come on try and stump me!

[Della~Moon]

LOL I want to test my limits as a writer of on-the-spot poetry, please give me a topic so I can flex the right side of my brain. (LOL this is going to be funny, but hey I’m willing to make a fool of myself in the name of fun)

[tjg1098]

Hmm...ok. Hope.

[Della~Moon]

A hope is like an endless majestic sea,
and it is an endless wonder for me.
So calm, comforting and secure at times,
pure and simple free of hated crimes.
But with in it’s depths dwell dark despair,
for every hope has a fear it must bear.
Hopes are broken like the breaking waves,
hope’s broken light leads to wandering dark caves.

[tjg1098]

:) Good poem...kinda dark, but that's even better.

[Della~Moon]

Darkness rules

[Jay]

I really like this poem. And yeah, it's a bit dark, but nice nevertheless. Della~Moon, you still up for a topic? If you like darkness, you could try broken dreams. And you haven't made a fool of yourself as far as I'm concerned and I doubt you ever will...

[Della~Moon]

DREAM
I walk along in a midnight dream,
And follow the path of a mountains stream.
I know not where I go know not who I was.
I search through my soul for some hidden cause.
I fallow my heart through darkness and fear,
Yet the roads end shall never draw near.
I search for something that I will never see,
Love is something much to distant for me.

[Jay]

It's great, Della. You really weren't kidding when you said you liked darkness. And you just knew what I meant when I said you could try the topic of broken dreams. It's nice to know there really is someone who can understand you.