rubric

[cacian]

cubism
is a soliloquy
on heroism
what does not change
shape
does not get faith
the omen to other
gates
the leader to upper states.

[Pompey Bum]

what does not change
shape
does not get faith

Ah, suddenly I understand your poetry! Never mind me if I try to tell you about meter (keep developing sharp images and sounds though). I can see you know perfectly well what you want to do. Nice job! :)

[cacian]

Pompey thank you for the feedback. I never have meters in mind when I write. :)