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Shadowlight
07-26-2019, 11:41 PM
Every detail written,
by two hands
upon fresh paper.
Unerasable letters flow into a work in progress,
a one-of-a-kind story,
their newest original manuscript.

Each hand grasps a corner
tries to tear a straight line
down the middle
between each word.
So each can have their own half
of a story
with jagged edges.

Adolescent09
07-27-2019, 01:58 AM
Very nice and to the Point.

I can see paper, hands, writing, working, trying,

Then the deconstruction and hint of healing.

cacian
07-27-2019, 12:21 PM
This is very well and very punchy.
Very well done ! :)

tailor STATELY
07-27-2019, 03:30 PM
Enjoyed your poem... made me sad. "Jagged edges" is a nice touch.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY