that

[cacian]

I raise my profile
I believe in docile
my doctrine is
opal.

[tailor STATELY]

Enjoyed your minimalist poem very much. The expression "play of colour" was created for the opal to describe its iridescence, a playful way of describing your doctrine.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[Pompey Bum]

This is a little gem of a poem, Cacian--pun intended. Your raised profile is an interesting image for the start--it has the feel of an autograph. And your final image also captures something unique about you--this time with fiery color (don't you just love an opal?). Sandwiched between is wordplay (between docile and doctrine)?that tells us this is a Cacian poem. And that in barely four lines. Nice work--in my opinion, your best so far.

[cacian]

tailor STATELY and Pompey Bum thank you very much for reading and the feedback.
I much enjoyed reading them. :)

[Danik 2016]

I specially loved the surprise contained in the last line.

[cacian]

I specially loved the surprise contained in the last line.

Danik lovely to see you posting again. Many thanks for reading. :)