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View Full Version : Hello ,I'm the new member Rosy. I really enjoyed reading your points



Rosy
01-08-2019, 09:48 AM
Do you like this poem. Why?

...call you a book
not a candle
When turn your pages
never reach the end
How generous
you are
To the petals of a flower
When dry in your arms.

tonywalt
01-08-2019, 04:31 PM
It's pretty good. I generally don't critique poems, but the membership here will be happy to.

tailor STATELY
01-12-2019, 05:52 PM
Welcome !

Enjoyed your poem. I like the metaphorical use of book and candle as well as the minimalism... is English your second (third, fourth,...) language ?

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY