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[cacian]

love is
the spitting image
of a privet
when glad
it turns vivid
glamour is a plumber
when sour
it is a tower
about to fall in a hour
call the rivet
or it is a dip no skip
would lower.

[tailor STATELY]

Scans nicely... very abstract... love it !

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[cacian]

Scans nicely... very abstract... love it !

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

tailor STATELY many thanks for reading :)

[kiz_paws]

I enjoyed the flow of the poem.

[cacian]

I enjoyed the flow of the poem.

Kiz_paws thank very much for reading :)

[prendrelemick]

I like the foraging for words effect.

[cacian]

I like the foraging for words effect.

prendrelemick bonjour mon ami !!!:)
nice to see you back.
Thanks for reading the feedback is interesting I am liking foraging haha ;)