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sundarramchand
09-26-2018, 03:26 AM
Manifolds

Eyes that feel,
Eyes that heal,
Making things real
Or lifting them into realms surreal

The hands of mind
Creating a sanctuary for the exploring soul to find
Eyes that lock,
Intertwining minds and souls resonating to a ethreal clock

Adding dimensions and hidden spaces
A whole universe behind those smiling faces
Or a whole world of emotions
emerging from abstract notions

No one is truly alone or lost,
There is hope for everyone, even Faust
Everything has meaning in this multidimensional multiverse,
Hopefully even this innocuous piece of verse.

kiz_paws
10-06-2018, 08:45 AM
Uplifting. Enjoyed your poem.

Shadowlight
11-06-2018, 01:35 PM
I agree with Kiz-paws, I enjoyed. It's hard to explain something as abstract as the soul writing within its own abstract qualities, but I think you pulled it off here. I liked the honoring quality of awe to it all as well.